Thursday, March 5, 2020

An Ode To Freedom -Ii Comments

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If a life-long prison impacts so much,
What about birth after birth of life cycles?
Man's used to life of incarceration,
A prisoner to be life after life,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 March 2020

Krishna died heart broken and dejected, Buddha forgotten oh in his own land, Poor Socrates was poisoned O to die, Christ was hanged and brutally killed, Meera too was offered a bowl of bane.....so true and impressive.A sensitive poem is duly delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 March 2020

I must thank you for this solitary vote. Had I fought an election, I would have lost the deposit.... Your feedback was like oasis in a desert.

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