Friday, February 23, 2018

An Ode To Chocolate Comments

Rating: 5.0

O what is this that doth taste so sweet
Wrapped in nuts, making life complete?
Tis cocoa, butter and sugar neat
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Catherine Habbie
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 20 April 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art ceremoniously rich in tone. Thanks for sharing, Catherine.

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2019

Fantastic poem on a very sweet topic. The treatment of the subject brings out its merits and the variety of ways it can entice every child or a grown up alike. Thank you so much. It goes into MyPoemList.

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Sarah Shahzad 13 December 2019

this is wonderful, I loved reading it... thanks so much for posting here...! ! i'm write as well so please check my site too poemtheart thank you :)

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Senay T 09 February 2019

Great! I loved everything about it and how it had authentic words.

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Catherine Habbie 02 May 2018

Thank you so much. Glad everyone liked it.

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Paul Reed 20 April 2018

An entertaining poem about the temptations of chocolate. Well done. I like the rhyming pattern of three lines in a row.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 January 2018

Catherine, i love dark chocolates... such a great poem👍👍👍

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Judith Blatherwick 29 January 2018

Great rhyming and I really enjoyed reading. The only problem now is that I have a chocolate craving and no chocolate.

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