Sunday, March 12, 2017

An Ode To A Doll Maker Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once I saw a little girl playing with a dancer doll.
Her outfit was embroidered with the silk and silver yarn,
And decorated carefully with gold beads and sequins.
Her scarf was as wavy and transparent as a clear mountain stream.
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Savita Tyagi
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A creative rhythm binds together all creative hearts and even the little girl playing with the dolls gets stringed together in the saga. Beautiful poem. Spellbinding narrative. Top score

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2022

A wonderful ode! Appreciated the way it is composed.....Top score!

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Susan Williams 11 April 2017

You made a feast of this! ! ! I love it. I don'; t think I can ever again see a doll without thinking about this poem - - a writer must keep that essence of childhood in their heart- to look beyond the surface but to see the details of the surface as well, to understand the ties between the objects and the possessors, between artist and art. Well done, Savita!

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 March 2017

Beautiful poem flowing in creative way. Person who made this beautiful doll is well appreciated. Loved reading it the way you praised the creator! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 March 2017

It is great poem on artistic work. High standard penmanship. I feel each line is dancing in Kathakalli. The best line I get glee is... An angel in stone seems to fly at your command. Many thanks dear Savita for posting such a diamond piece.....10

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Savita Tyagi 15 March 2017

Thank you so much Kumarmani Mahakul for your wonderful comment. It makes writing the poem a worthwhile endeavor. So good to hear from you.

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