An Ode To A Butterfly Comments
You delicate darling
miracle of grace
dancing damsel
arresting all the eyes
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Your poem is as beautiful as the picture, Valsa. I love the line why are you in such a hurry? Exactly! One wants to take a good look, but off they flit. This weekend I took a bunch of city kids on a nature walk and how I enjoyed their awe and excitement in seeing butterflies.
frail is your frame short is your sojourn yet how glorious is your life casting spells of delight in every eye. - - - - - - - - - - - What a beauty in this poem ! ! Yes, matchless glory ! !
Oh, matchless glory heaven sent fairy You fill the world with pleasant feelings.
Oh, matchless glory heaven sent fairy flitting amid emerald greens hovering under sapphire skies Why are you in such hurry? .. love these lines. It is really a beautiful ode to beautiful creature. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided.Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Kumaramani sir! I wanted the image to be as colorful as possible like a butterfly wing!
I adore butterflies so this poem was one for my heart. I have always marveled at their beauty and fragility in their short time on Earth. A lovely write 10+
Thank you so much Simone! Yes, butterflies are such fragile beings, yet incarnations of loveliness feasting the eyes!
Lovely poem. Brings a moment of lightness just like the moment of watching butterflies lightens the heart. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Savita! Light as the butterfly, I wanted the poem to be light and glad you could feel the lightness!
Your poem itself is a fantastic butterfly casting spells of delight on the reader's heart. (10)
A beautiful ode to a beautiful creature. The words picked up to describe the ethereal beauty of a butterfly also hold good, in equal measure, to this amazing poetic masterpiece. Thanks, Valsa ji. miracle of grace / dancing damsel wisp of loveliness / floating like a dream /...Oh, matchless glory
When you call this a poetic masterpiece, I feel equally excited and embarrassed! However thank you so much Rajnish sir for your lovely comment!
Flowers have colors and fragrance to attract the lovers, that's how nature discloses the mysteries of love. The poetess has a lovely sight to see, a beautiful heart to feel and an efficient pen that can capture the seen and felt beauty. The output is a great poem.
Thank you so much Akhtar ji! Your lovely words about me are more than what I deserve!
Loveliness! ! Delicate. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Poem is as soothing as a lovely butterfly wing of rainbow colours. Beautifully written too. Thanks Valsa for sharing. X
Thank you so much poet friend...! Glad you could feel the soothing effect!
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Their life, I'm afraid does not last too long A few days of pleasure and they'll be gone Your poem will keep them long in my heart Like a lilting symphony from Mozart Thanks Valsa