Saturday, December 21, 2013

An Ode Of River Rhyme Comments

Rating: 4.7

The mountains
that paint Terra's face
too arrogant to share diction
The sea
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adheez van der beanthz
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Prasanna Kumari 02 April 2014

good poem with unique expression bringing unique thought....

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2014

Stunning imagery and so beautifully expressed!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 March 2014

Wow wind dispersal of poetry, thanx to dear ol poemhunter to convey great poems like this. Imaginative. Tc.

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Jemima Rivas 18 March 2014

very smooth it glides love it :)

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Bing Hua 18 February 2014

Good poem. I like it

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Maya Hanson 11 February 2014

Pretty and thought provoking :) i like it! ~mye3

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 February 2014

Very lovely

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Maria Goodison 17 January 2014

Enjoyed reading this one well done keep it up.

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Far Lapenna 11 January 2014

Beautiful, beautiful poetry, I love the amount of emotion you express in this poem

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Emily Angel 05 January 2014

Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.

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Mohammed Albalushi 24 December 2013

full of love and emotion, well write

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 24 December 2013

Truly a lovely write, full of emotions and imagery. Enjoyed reading this verse. So beautiful....

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 December 2013

Only river so faithful sow the word seeds pick the script verses then harvest it into a love poem....... though the look is restricted by window, yet, it illustrates the purposeful view to show the reader a part of life, in other parts river carries many things....many...many.... Well written.

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Patricia Grantham 23 December 2013

Very nicely written with good details. Nature expressed in such a lovely way. Just like love flowing from the rivers and bursting with such beauty. Enjoyed. Keep on penning with power.

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Erin Stevens 22 December 2013

This is so sweet and lovely!

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Savita Tyagi 22 December 2013

Beautiful, poetic tribute to rivers life blood for humans. Enjoyed it.

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Tribhawan Kaul 22 December 2013

Everything that is in nature do inspire us to write and It is wish of every poet to create through nature. Beautiful poem.

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Hazel Durham 22 December 2013

Nature so beautifully captured in it's unique essence to deliver your love in such a magnificent way!

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Ramesh T A 22 December 2013

Whole Nature seems to be at your service to deliver your love longing to your lady! Wonderful, my dear fellow! You are lucky indeed to have a nice service for your love!

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Matt Mooney 22 December 2013

A great concept-nature being beyond translation, well handled in this lovely poem.The river seems to have its own language which it shares with the poet indirectly. I like the shape, structure and language of the poem.

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