An Ode For Rain Comments
Buried under the earth
They need you, to give birth
To new seedlings
Natures worthy offerings
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Great thought put into this poem Nikunj and I liked your concept in that it is highly original and your imagination has worked wonders. Well done! Karin Anderson
An extraordinary rain prayer. Beautifully written. Kind regards, Sandra
a beautiful welcome to rain which starts life here....10
By now the pregnant sky ought to have delivered its burden.....but economic despair might yet loom in the future if the 'burden' is not big enough. Lets pray. Cheers. Subroto
Nice poem of well thought chosen words with figurative language.I like this poem. Please read my poem too. this is 10++=
these Musings on the RAIN SPRINGS forth a AUTUMNAL stirrings into the bowels of WINTERed SUMMER! -shree
I love it It is beautiful. I havent had parents and never have been pregnant but im glad someone sees that its beautiful to have a kid. Ive hurt almost my whole life wondering if my mom ever really cared or loved me as she had me. so Its always good to hear that someone is proud of pregnancy and love their child. thanx for sharing. ur friend krystal. feel free to read any of my poems that jump out at u and comment if u want.
Beautiful. I've never looked at it like that before. I especially like 'the pregnant sky'. It's just...different. I love that!
beautifull. how exactly you had said of the seeds prayer.i enjoyed reading this poem surya
Cute...rain drops to the hidden seeds are like sweet kheer in terra-cotta bowl...a poem with first-rain-fragrance
The sound of rain on the roof is very soothing to the poetic soul. Lovely write... Warm regards, Sandra
a good poem on rain gentle and meaningful 'the cause of human mirth' I prefer ' singing in the rain ' 10 from me+++++ regards
yuhu finally its rain tyme in delhi.............this poem is excellent.........worthy ode to the life giving elixir........... excellent
I read this one also. I picked it out the first time, because I live in Oregon and in rains here every chance it gets! It is very green here and we have fresh air though. When it is sunny, it is very windy. The wind blows all the dust away. :) DC
AHH: i love the rain i almost panicked yesterday when i thought it was gonna rain, even though my mom wouldnt let me go out if it rained it was too late i was determined to go out anyways but it didnt rain: LOV THE RAIN, LOVE THE POEM
yes, the earth needs the rain, especially its barren land. well written and pleasant to read.: -)
a fine write on the rain..really it's so hot dis days even i'm also dying for it :) i'l giv my 10++.
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7/18/2025 1:30:34 PM # 1.0.0
Like your imagination on this one. I'm a fan of rain, sound and cleansing it gives.