An October Night Comments
On a blue bed a very dim light,
Blue skies why you are black?
Twisting her body the restless night,
Curtains of clouds have a crack,
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COMMENT ONE; Twice PH 'erased' comments I'd typed. : ( AND I missed my nap when I, unsuccessfully, searched for a 'nude'; where are YOU hiding HER? ?
Your questions are too tough for me. Did I alredy say I missed my nap when searching, unsuccessfully for the 'nude'
It's been 'a while', a long while, since I read one of your poems. I don't remember you using rhymes before; I like the rhymes.
The photo gives meaning to your words, but I spent so much time looking for the 'nude' that I missed my afternoon nap! : )
So nice to read your poem after a long time. Hope you are doing well Akhtar Ji.
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7/27/2025 5:22:14 PM # 1.0.0
Outstanding poem, You have depicted the splendor of the nighttime with vibrant hues and significant imagery. Truly, the natural world is laid bare when we delve into its magnificence.