An Ocean Of Tears, A River Of Secrets. Comments

[An Ocean of Unseen Tears] An ocean of unseen tears Pulsing through my veins, sustain this proximity of flood of my running, boiling blood. Causing my minds subtle embrace of you! A humble of my lonely souls odd still, Causes my hearts lone chill, And my emotions quiver, As I pledge deeper and deeper into that secret filled river. (Thank you for submitting, Giorgio)

Volumes of vividness in this short but significant work.

liked it very much. all those who write in depth go deep into ones own self

This is very strong, short and to the point. We all go to that river now and then. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara