An Obsessive Sinner's Prayer Comments
Every Sunday after church, there is so much that I decide
But by mid week, I have already changed the sides
My resolutions to be blameless and just
Often fails to the world’s attractions and lust
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Its a bit long, sorta forget the point by the end of the poem. Syllables are a little off in some of the rhyming lines so the flow isnt as easy. But its very creative and came from the heart. I give it an 8.
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7/29/2025 8:08:29 AM # 1.0.0
'replaced long faces with a grin' etc.etc. Very good expression. Beautiful English. This is ofcourse a great prayer.......of a truly introspectiing soul.