~an Obscene Scene~ Comments

As always you weave a story to hold the readers attention a gruesome tale told with wonderful description. Well done

I very much like this poem. It took me into its own sort of world. It was like reading a book and I could hardly tear my eyes from the page.

A very thrilling and quite unique write. Almost left me chilled to the bone. Very intensive just like a movie. Passionate and enthralling.l

hmmm don't we all truely have dual personality... just some are more aware then others. I love this. You were clearly able to show two sides with out a big reveal. Very sexy and disturbing. Wonderful job as always!

Sometimes in life, so many things blindfold us from knowing the reality. This poem, fantastically narrates a very pitiful story with lots of poetic beauty a each stanza is connected nicely to the next with that chain of flowing ideas, the title chosen for this poem undoubtedly reflects the content as well as the themes in the poem. Though a sad poem, the diction employed here conveys a clear message and presents the exact imagery. I like this poem, very piteous but well written....Good job Enigma!

The mystery of a disturbed woman's mind written with such skill and creativity, you present the drama and the scene of how a persons imagination out of control is very dangerous. A chain of events bring the shocking conclusion chillingly ending in her realising she is wrong! Original and so entertaining!

You painted a vivid picture in my head and it was very entertaining. Your poem has both passion and brutality mixed nicely into one twisted story. Good write as always :)

Wow I'm glad you explained that because I would have a lot of questions for you... Haha great write, of course!

Oh, my.....! Terror has struck my throat dry! What a ghastly scene you have drawn! Though this is pure imagination, I have heard of real incidents like this where paranoic partners have done similar things to their husbands/wives who were very possessive and who slowly developed a kind of obsessive suspicion about the fidelty of their spouse! It was so engaging from start to finish like reading a thriller story! What mishap a twisted mind can bring!

This is an intense, powerful story with great use of metaphors, and vivid imagery pulsing at the primary human instincts: fear and passion. There is suspense and mystery in the last three stanzas till the end, till the last line. A really thought provoking poem!

Good thing you told the story. I thought for sure it was about my ex and her cold blade and my warm neck nice write! ! !