An Oak's Progress Comments

Beautiful work, Sonny - not a word spare, excellent imagery; as Ivor says, the full circle lifts it from a good poem to a great & haunting one.

The circle back to the start enhances this fine piece of writing A favourite ploy of the old irsish bards

the imagery and choice of words makes this poem AWESOME =)

Trees are such a beautiful and meaningful subject and you have placed a beautiful seed that will blossom within the mind, Thankyou Love Duncan X

'Muscular', 'callouses', 'burgeoning', 'fructify' - love the last section above all here, Sonny. Lovely poem. Regards, Gina.

I have always loved the mighty oak. I enjoyed your write also!