An Irony Far Deeper Than You Know Comments

Melissa, this is so cool. I love the way you set it up. You definately have talent. ^^

Wow. This is THE poem. It's simple and short, but extense in meaning, feelings and with a great ton. I just loved the way you composed it. Besides, your beliefs of not having writing talents, you have a future in it. =)

I like this because it's very simple and rhythmic, but the undercurrent of emotion brings it to the next level. It's William Carlos Williams with Charles Bukowski-esque, and that's something to be proud of.