Sunday, January 6, 2008

An Invitation To Tea (A Dark Comedy) Part 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

(It is advisable you read part 1 first)


Charles Latimer broke up the slices of bread he brought and scattered them across the path. “You’ll never guess what Grace Forbes said to me this morning. She said that I would have made some lucky woman a wonderful husband. Of course, she doesn’t really know me. I mean, if she did she wouldn’t have said that, now would she? ”
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Melvina Germain 07 January 2008

Still very interesting, I too enjoyed the conversation with the pigeons and the fact that Mr Latimer lowered his voice so the passers by wouldn't here what was being said. I found that rather calming actually and could certainly see a clear picture of the occasion. I must read on David, see you later. Melvina

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Duncan Wyllie 06 January 2008

I loved the conversation with the pigeons, so well done, and then having to pause for the passer-by This is really enjoyable David “Mr Latimer, Charlotte and I were wondering.” “What is that Grace? ”....caught off guard? Brilliant thought behind this second part, I must read on..please excuse me David Love duncan X

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JoAnn McGrath 06 January 2008

I'm questioning why these two have so many friends over to see Mr Potter.....yet they are not married themselves...and my they seek his approval of the other males they brought....

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2008

Ok... on to the next.... can not wait! I love these pieces!

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Linda Ori 06 January 2008

David - I'm so impressed! This is an excellent story - I'm moving on the part III right away..................................... Linda :)

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