Sunday, January 6, 2008

An Invitation To Tea (A Dark Comedy) Part 1 Comments

Rating: 4.5

Charles Latimer visited the corner shop run by the Forbes sisters Charlotte and Grace almost every day. He could have collected his groceries in one visit, but the short intercourse of words they exchanged broke the emptiness in his life. As he entered the shop, the tiny bell above the door chimed.

Grace Forbes stood behind the counter. “Good morning Mr Latimer, ” she said. “What would you like today? ”
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Melvina Germain 07 January 2008

A Black comedy huh, that's interesting, I must read on, you've got me now. Melvina

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Alison Cassidy 06 January 2008

This is beginning to sound like 'Arsenic and Old lace'. I'm intrigued... love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 06 January 2008

Ok David Here we go, I'm hooked, this is great.... Love duncan X

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JoAnn McGrath 06 January 2008

well I cheated and read all three then came to comment.....but the frist definitely leads you on for more....: O)

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Linda Ori 06 January 2008

OK - you, ve got my attention........................ Linda :)

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Patricia Gale 06 January 2008

Wonderful story... can not wait for the next!

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