Tuesday, March 17, 2009

An Invitation. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

If thou be the spear that pierces my soul
Never will thrust seem so sweet.
The softest of places thou wouldst control
If thou enter, and never retreat.
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Fay Slimm
Flood Places
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Kevin Wells 24 March 2009

Fay... thou art a sensual scribe and no mistake! Very beautiful love poetry... I will never look at a sword and its scabbard in quite the same way! (Phew!)

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Lynda Robson 17 March 2009

Quite lovely and passionate Fay, a great read, 10 Lynda xx

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 17 March 2009

the words there were pictures...lovely

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Sandra Martyres 17 March 2009

Marvellous imagery and verse - a beautiful poem 10+

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm
in Cornwall U.K.
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