An Invitation Comments
When the birds come down,
And take shelter in the dense,
Thick branches of the trees,
And below the shades,
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Movement in poem like a brook singing dancing advancing so nice
You have created a wonderful setting....! The pouring rain, swirling wind, shaking trees, floating leaves and children playing with paper boats! In the midst of all this hullaballoo, a timid beautiful girl has extended an invitation to you to have a cup pf hot tea with her! How can you turn it down!
You have made the atmosphere cozy thru your superb diction.Loved reading.
Sharing a cup of tea on a rainy day is one of the best pleasure of life. Lovely poem.
A beautiful description of a romantic invitation in the marvels of rains.
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Movement in poem like a brook singing dancing advancing so nice