Wednesday, March 22, 2006

An Intruder Comments

Rating: 4.6

In this place of silence and gloom,
sits an intruder on a mossy tomb
He is a very small bird with a colourful breast,
and the crumbling graves, are his place of rest.
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Ernestine Northover 09 June 2006

I love any poem about a robin, they are delightful and so friendly. Nice write Sylvia. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 05 April 2006

Epic like, I pictured myself as the robin looking down from the steeple on a warm summers day.Beautiful, moving and content feeling from this one.Love Duncan

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Gary Bryson 22 March 2006

A reflective and peaceful poem to bring quiet thoughts to a hectic world. We all need to stop and open our senses to the grace that is ever around us. Well done!

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2006

What a precious portrait of a bird. His message is both beautiful and profound.. Love, Sandra

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