An Intruder Comments

Its all about love and love only! !

True to life. Your poems have a true sense of reality. They are very relatable. tfs.

a heart betrayed by treachery, asking the qestion why to the intruder, first to occupy his heart and stealthly leaving it for another. great poignat poem.

Wow! Really nice poem describing a love with jilt in an interesting style along with charming language. I like it very much.

Thou came and won my heart, I was not ready for that Yet I sacrificed my ego At the altar of thy love..... yes right time to act, , good poem...10

Painful. Poet has special way in directing his emotion through words. direct, compact and complete. Good piece of work from Mohd Akmal Nazir.