Thursday, June 27, 2013

An Introspection Comments

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Into the dark recesses of my elusive mind
I tiptoed silently with candlelight;
To thoughtfully watch the curious mind
That proliferate thoughts, away from my sight.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Valsa George 19 December 2014

What a paradox..... We are strangers to ourselves! The real 'I' in me is always hiding! How 'I' appear outside is only a fake and the' I' here is only my shadow! The last stanza is an icing on the cake! Enjoyed much!

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Queeny Gona 27 September 2013

The real I in me? Great introspective write of yours is really wonderful!

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 June 2013

Yes Nasarudheen, it is a primordial truth.

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 June 2013

Thank you Survi for having gone through the poem and liked it.

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Survi Sharma 28 June 2013

wow great poem with the best title and description

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It is a good poem that arouse the Bhagavat Gita sloka,13: 1.Kshetra Kshetragna explanation in me.

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