Wednesday, June 11, 2008

An Introduction Comments

Rating: 4.7

I don't wish to introduce myself,
Because reality stirrs my soul.
I am like one,
Who has lost his goal.
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Ahatisham Alam
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Rajnish Manga 29 June 2017

Outstanding philosophical expression. Nicely articulated and sweetly rhymed non-introduction. Because reality stirrs my soul. I am like one.... Who has lost his goal.... as a lamenting soul

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Roseann Shawiak 05 March 2016

You have expressed one of the deepest feelings of all humanity in this poem, and have done a superb job of it! Excellent poem, great meaning for all when read in your poem. Thank you for sharing your wise thoughts. RoseAnn

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Anna jonson 03 August 2008

i like this poem it describes your personally beautifully

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, aryaindia 23 July 2008

Your lyrical submission of a feeling all of us without exception feel is only too well understood by arya here. This is exactly a feeling that is called compassion and empathy in the eyes of a poet. God be with you........arya.

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