Friday, October 16, 2009

An Instrument Of Poetry Comments

Rating: 4.2

Oh make me an instrument an Instrument of Poetry
I'll write with my hands - and exclaim
Oh make me an instrument an Instrument of Innocence
I'll write with my hands - again and again!
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Luwi Habte 25 October 2009

dear John Am going to say what i feel about this website, which is a kind of family well, that is kind of exciting, nice and terrific home... plus all the comments and criticizms are useful the thing is, there are some who never knows how to do it It is like nobody want to be criticized, but adviced.. as i am so little and small poetest, i can see there are nonscence poets and there are smart and sweet poets like you and hasmukah amtal.. by the way, this poem is so nice piece also advice for the others including me.. so dear poet, am glad for your poem..this is so nice piece and guess what, this is the longest comment i have been written since i face the poem hunter family.. your daughter by poetry luwi habte

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Anna Dorfman 25 October 2009

A respectful way of thinking. You don`t just speak about love, you are love yourself

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Emu Getachew 24 October 2009

Well said John, Instrument to poetry requires constructive criticism, kindness, and at times patience. We all come from a different place with different life stories and with various level of language ability. No one at least I can speak for myself enjoys being thrown under the bus for failure to meet the requirement necessary to write a poem that meets all the rules and regulations. As for me, English is not my first language however, I love the language and respect it enough to be true to my work. Now, in doing so I have upset many and will continue to do so. That said, I am in no place in my language ability to argue nor defend my work based on rules and regulations. So as John suggested let us all allow each other to crawl before running :)

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Beauty Philosophy 22 October 2009

A well- crafted poem...Indeed everything is involved in writing a poem: the mind, the muse, the heart, the soul..thanks for sharing.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 20 October 2009

a good done! a harmonious Instrument of poetry… our keys are the letters... we are the words sitters... Thanks For Sharing! 10++++++++ Enigma. with LoVe&PeaCe

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Merna Ibrahim 18 October 2009

Great poem Mr.John......really inspiring piece...10 Merna.

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Patti Masterman 16 October 2009

What an inspiring poem this is. Can tell the Muse has been smiling down upon you..cheers, Patti

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