Monday, June 30, 2014

An Inspired Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

A weaver of words in deep quiet reflects
In his mind's prism, many a thought deflects
Within him the rainbow colours of passion rage
He scripts songs of beauty and rhyme on page after page
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2019

As from pen to paper, his fancies flow In a lingua that has an unusual glow Though a great epic may not be born His songs move even hearts of flint n' stone........touching inscription. Beautiful poem.

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Bri Edwards 09 December 2016

From “Grammarist” (online) Fueled/fueling vs. fuelled/fuelling In American English, the verb fuel is inflected fueled and fueling—with one l. In all other main varieties of English, it becomes fuelled and fuelling—with two l‘s. The spelling difference extends to refuel, which makes refueled and refueling in American English and refuelled and refuelling everywhere else. It likewise extends to other, rarer derivatives such as fueler/fueller. favorite stanza: “As from pen to paper, his fancies flow In a lingua that has an unusual glow Though a great epic may not be born His songs move even hearts of flint n' stone” …………..have you FELT my heart? ! It doesn’t - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -move! ! The poem has nice flow and some nice rhymes and some close-enough rhymes. I DON’T like when the rhymes are better than the rest of the poem, which they are not in this one. I’ll say not all of this is true for all poems or all readers, but it’s ok to say all this in a poem. It is NOT a doctoral thesis on astronomy! ! ! bri :)

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Kee Thampi 13 July 2014

great inspiration to new heights

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

Inspiration is the poet's necessity. We all need it. Well written Valsa.

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Hazel Durham 07 July 2014

Passion ignites in a feast of words that move it's readers in every way, to see the world from an inspired poet's mind that enchants and weaves a magic spell is very special! Superb write! !

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Joseph Anderson 06 July 2014

This has caused a stirring in me, a desire to write more and hopefully more meaningfully.You said it so lucidly and with great beauty. I like your way with rhyme

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2014

this is written for the inspired poet. a true poet

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An inspired poet very well portrayed in a succulent manner...............Valsa.............a sure 10 for lovely tribute.......

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2014

Nature is the original poet, all other poets are inspired poets. A nice poem I've rated it 10.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2014

Nature is the original poet, all other poets are inspired poets. A nice poem I've rated it 10.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Wonderful poem about an Inspired poet...Each lines you have sketched too beautifully...I read it thrice...I loved reading each lines...I cannot tell which line is the best from this poem. All lines are equally captivating and speaking of excellent qualities which a poet should have. Loved it from your pen..Valsa. Thank you Valsa for many lovely comments for my poems.

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Dinesan Madathil 01 July 2014

A poet of the kind you have sketched here may be there... perhaps if we search on the PH one or two of the kind may be there. But we need to scan the whole website. It is nice that at times a poet with some calibre and identity comes forward to define the traits of others poets who are enviably superior. Thank you madam for referring to an ideal poet who is INSPIRED. A fine poem deserving a10.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 July 2014

Beautiful poem about an inspired poet in melodious lines. Reading the poem inspires a poet to come up with more of his creations. Thank you.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 01 July 2014

a poet reflecting on what a poet should be...and splendidly.

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Chuy Amante 30 June 2014

A most spectacular Write! I'll go to bed dreaming poetry tonight!

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Piyush Dey 30 June 2014

it was a nice poem, a beautiful take on a poet. loved reading it.

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