Saturday, May 30, 2009

An Insomniac...And His Night. Comments

Rating: 5.0

An insomniac in my blood,
rises to the fore,
and slips some heartfelt words,
in a rhythmic glitter,
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 June 2009

Most of the poets are insomnic I guess. Even I am. My poems DILETTANTISH HUNGER and MY DARK NIGHTS reflect the same. This poem is beautiful with real heartfel expressions so well described.

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Reshma Ramesh 08 June 2009

bravo! bravo! ............well done...............beautiful verses

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

I liked the concluding stanza....10++ for that...It's so familiar...walked with your verse thru a known lane...Brishti Mazumdar

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Maitreyee Joshi 04 June 2009

a wonderful poem written by a wonder ful young poet remaining awake at night.10

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

emotions streaming down as in water falls, Sarvesh...your poem isn't sleepy...congrats...10

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Marieta Maglas 02 June 2009

''She forgets her planetary creations, and wraps her immensity in one cloak of her overwhelming silence.'' A sense of the immensity.This poem makes me figure out that we are so small, as human being, but we have such huge feelings.10++

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Indira Babbellapati 30 May 2009

sarvesh, tell me what can i say about such intense emotion expressed so compactly...you are a poetic genius, young man!

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