An insomniac in my blood,
rises to the fore,
and slips some heartfelt words,
in a rhythmic glitter,
...
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bravo! bravo! ............well done...............beautiful verses
I liked the concluding stanza....10++ for that...It's so familiar...walked with your verse thru a known lane...Brishti Mazumdar
a wonderful poem written by a wonder ful young poet remaining awake at night.10
emotions streaming down as in water falls, Sarvesh...your poem isn't sleepy...congrats...10
''She forgets her planetary creations, and wraps her immensity in one cloak of her overwhelming silence.'' A sense of the immensity.This poem makes me figure out that we are so small, as human being, but we have such huge feelings.10++
sarvesh, tell me what can i say about such intense emotion expressed so compactly...you are a poetic genius, young man!
Most of the poets are insomnic I guess. Even I am. My poems DILETTANTISH HUNGER and MY DARK NIGHTS reflect the same. This poem is beautiful with real heartfel expressions so well described.