Sunday, February 1, 2009

An Insight...Probably. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Into
some scattered breaths
of bygone moments…
Into
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Shekhar Joshi 03 June 2009

beautiful..... u r brilliant.....

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Chitra - 14 February 2009

a deep delved thought and insightful

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Indira Babbellapati 10 February 2009

u r now a seasoned poet, sarvesh!

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Moushumi moushumi 09 February 2009

As a repeat comment: ... The last comment was my broken imagination though it was not in those lines...the lines i wrote were exactly playing in my mind right that moment so it came out instantly. 'The joy of non-existence...was really a deep line for me. thank you for sharing.

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Vaibhav Pandey 08 February 2009

'In the flow of wanton life, I gather the deathliness of it all. And the oncoming darkness, brings with it, the joy of non-existence, or the existence of joyless ecstasy? '.......such deep thoughs...great my friend.

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Moushumi moushumi 07 February 2009

'The joy of existence and the existence of joyless ecstasy'...clicked my thought.10+

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Pooja Ladyluck 02 February 2009

amazing dude....nw........daz hw a poem shud b.......great....i took tym to get the scene.....well........gr8 write man.......kewl....thanx man! ! !

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