Sunday, September 11, 2011

An Inscrutable Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

The no message message
A space without a frame
No sound or a syllable
leaving behind a name
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Romeo Della Valle
COMMENTS
Amber Toohey 23 September 2011

The first I've read by you, it was a good one to get my feet wet with!

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Diplove Gautam 20 September 2011

It is a very nice poem with nice starting, best content and with the deserved ending...very interesting and inspiring one.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 September 2011

How wonderfully you relate the very first line and the last two lines. So amazing poetry here... ((You will have to explain; Some day and face yourself.)) ..and it's a fact...10++++

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

The horrors of the telephone. You've expressed your emotions really well here, and this is quite relatable.

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Sajna Kailas 13 September 2011

you again and again rocking, my knowledge and talent is not enough to comment your poems by your great fan sajna (Y. N) JESUS LOVES YOU! ! ! ! !

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