Friday, August 26, 2022

An Innocent Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish for nothing
But to live in your eyes
When they sparkle with pride
I want to be your first thought
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Nosheen Irfan
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Anjandev Roy 16 August 2023

Such a wonderful piece.....thanks for sharing....

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Nabakishore Dash 27 August 2022

simply excellent.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 August 2022

Excellent poem especially the second line. I wish i wrote that Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 August 2022

A fantastic poem. Read this poem with great interest. Appreciated the content, the flow and the very core of this wonderful poem. Top score.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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