An Innocent Voyeur Comments
An old man glances through a window
to one in the building below.
Through slats awry in seduction's haste,
candlelight strobes
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Very nice work on an old subject, typical c.j heck poem no stone left unturned a true poets account of an event warm regards AJS
Sensitively handled, you left all players with the dignity of their humanity
Nice one, CJ. It has prompted a response from this old man - in print, that is!
A beautifully written and atmospheric poem. Excellent indeed. Chrissie
Just the perfect temperature, C J...just right...I see you did not 'procrastinate' too long...thank you for sharing...very well done... Lare
CJ, I do like the way you give room for the reader to determine their own level of sensual feelings. Softly teasing as always. Rusty
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7/31/2025 12:25:38 AM # 1.0.0
How sad! Poor old guy all worked up and he didn't even get any action! lol Well done. I like! S