An Innocent Village Girl Comments

I agree with Stefanie, but who is this innocent village girl.

This is a very sweet poem, you have captured her well here.

Very vivid and ecstatic write on a beauty escapade

It isn't a poem.... It's a picture.. You could almost see the girl in front of your eyes.. Really nice.

very nice and charming...a bit mirror mirror on the wall...lolzzz...but dats poetic licence....! loved it.... :) be happy sat

Very beautiful poem, the ink u used is never fade of its beautiful colors :) I liked this stanza 'Your smile sprout like gloss of jasmine blooms; Like the mellow rays of a spring daybreak. Eyes are passionate, mysterious, and deep Elegant hair so long and fingers lovely ' very beautiful really :)

Good poem keep it up. Lets see some more. May i invite you to read my poem Called, the beast.

Good poem keep it up. Lets see some more. May i invite you to read my poem Called, the beast.