An Innocent's Cry Comments

he will always look at us from heaven he will always ask GOD to look after you he loves you sweetheart, he love's you so much......it is mama's promise and solace to innocent... we are gripped by the feelings and the poetess has done right thing in espressingthe evenvery beautifullyy... i appriciate it... love to read also....10 read mine.. bidding farewell..mother....papa do u knwo....papa u too

A very painful moment in the lifeof a child, when a parent dies. She will recover and go on. the Papa will always be looking down. Very good write 10 Lynn

a story of a poem....a poem of a story....a dairy of pain and acceptance... united to create a sensation of truth.....a master piece of emotional strength....a powerful poem of hope that all are part of the grant orchestration of life existence...an experience of hope and prayer....thank you for sharing a 10 +++++++

This is so beautiful, very sad this truely brought tears to my eyes 10!

It is from your heart Excellent Rgds Nooruddeen

The death is always unpleasant and it is hard to be reconciled with her. Faith, that the man isn't walking away completely, it is helping the ones, which our stay on the earth and they are bewailing him. Good write. I like it. (10v) Greetings.Maria Barbara Korynt

a very sad poem but it was written very well 10+++ No Reason To Care

very nice heart touching poem very nice good jod

A very moving tribute. memorable, poignant...that touched me deeply. Cheers. Subroto

May I say not exactly my type of of poem, regarless It had meaning and thought so it came from the heart therefore It is a good peice but not exactly a poem.

THIS INNOCENT CHILD REQUIRES LOT OF LOVE FROM MOTHER & RELATIVES/FRIENDS, ALONG WITH THE LOVING GRACE OF GOD, TO GET OVER THIS TRAGIC LOSS! 10! -Raj Nandy

A pathetic poem penned with powerful narrative skill. CP

i like it. not a typical poem. very sad. i like it =]

It took me to age of 4, i used to love my father, when i used to wait for him, how painfully the child cries, when he sees, his love getting out of hands.

The tragedy of death...especially the death of a father in a young persons eyes.. very touching...in that bible Jesus says 'I am the way the truth and the life.. no one comes to the Father but by me ' regards Alf

You told me my duck... is it safe with you now? .. knowing it is mother is it.. quaking it's song..mother watching dad.. helping my hand.. through it to fold.. him in forever.. again..iip..?

A TOUCHING STORY presented in well written prose

nice one ate...condolence...give my regards to this child... Ate, please capitalize your Bible....

Grace, don't invite us to shed tears. We dislike children seeing the appearance of demise…... We don't want the death to be reflected through innocent expressions... But we could cry without tears... once in a while with you through this poem... and the feel took birth in your delusion… great work… sensitive….. -jaleel

Thought provoking lines.10.