Standing in the
courtrooms of hell
waiting to be sentenced
by the devil himself
...
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Deep and very touching write. So many times human being becomes victim of frantic illusions of system which is rightly depicted here. Wonderful and praiseworthy job by poet friend Dave. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful poem...An innocent man is hanged to death, though no fault of him..So true, in our daily lives too innocent people are the victims, just because they are innocent..Meaningful poem. Loved it.
That's amazing! Are you the man who read my love poison and commented? I'm glad I followed it and read this. :) thanks for reading it by the way.
I hope all of this isnt about you, if it is I am sorry. Very real, raw work! It must be!
Innocence is not determined by deeds but by heart/ a great poem! ! 10+++
Very nice poem indeed There are projects to save even the violent animals But none to protect an innocent men. Your poem inspired my Hopes of Death Walk the poetic path my dear Walker
The last line rings with sadness/disappointment. Dave, thanks for writing this. It's always the innocent people suffering. But like Peter and Paul, maybe God has a plan. There's always a Higher Purpose. Great poem.
sad but it does happen in real life too..a good poem portraying the anguish of an innocent man who is being sentenced to death for a crime he did not commit
It sadly does happen. Even one innocents death is too much. If we let the guilty get away. They will do it again, thinking that it is okay. Good poem, by a good poet.
guuud job done by u man keep it up n keep writing on the trash ov this system
Dude seems like the system just needs bodies to keep runnin they dont care if they got the right people got no money you got no justice good poem man
Such a wasteful energy they done, to blame and change to end random useful bulb/light without checking proper reason why the shine is not appear...should we blame on a bulb anytime it doesnt shine? what about the other bulb who really not working or is it switch or fuse broken? ...the wrong judgment never make room bright again as the pick wrong decision to fix problem....i am so sad and cry for this man for him deserves better living.....Oh justice come and heal the blame! ! _Unwritten Soul
world is become worse therefor, your impression is great nice a poem