Wednesday, January 18, 2012

An Innocent Man Comments

Rating: 4.2

Standing in the
courtrooms of hell
waiting to be sentenced
by the devil himself
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Dave Alan Walker
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Chaminda Pushpadewa 30 October 2018

world is become worse therefor, your impression is great nice a poem

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Ramesh Rai 09 April 2015

Deep and very touching write. So many times human being becomes victim of frantic illusions of system which is rightly depicted here. Wonderful and praiseworthy job by poet friend Dave. Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 September 2013

Beautiful poem...An innocent man is hanged to death, though no fault of him..So true, in our daily lives too innocent people are the victims, just because they are innocent..Meaningful poem. Loved it.

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Mr. Bean V2 08 March 2013

i hope he was hanged i hate innocent people

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Mr. Bean V2 08 March 2013

i hope he was hanged i hate innocent people

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Harmony Richardson-lee 14 February 2012

That's amazing! Are you the man who read my love poison and commented? I'm glad I followed it and read this. :) thanks for reading it by the way.

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Bella Forrest 04 February 2012

Love the thought behind this one...

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Vicky Biorseth 02 February 2012

I hope all of this isnt about you, if it is I am sorry. Very real, raw work! It must be!

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Vipins Puthooran 29 January 2012

Innocence is not determined by deeds but by heart/ a great poem! ! 10+++

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Sankaran Ayya 27 January 2012

Very nice poem indeed There are projects to save even the violent animals But none to protect an innocent men. Your poem inspired my Hopes of Death Walk the poetic path my dear Walker

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Jacqui Broad 26 January 2012

The last line rings with sadness/disappointment. Dave, thanks for writing this. It's always the innocent people suffering. But like Peter and Paul, maybe God has a plan. There's always a Higher Purpose. Great poem.

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Renu Kakkar 24 January 2012

sad but it does happen in real life too..a good poem portraying the anguish of an innocent man who is being sentenced to death for a crime he did not commit

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Ace Of Black Hearts 23 January 2012

It sadly does happen. Even one innocents death is too much. If we let the guilty get away. They will do it again, thinking that it is okay. Good poem, by a good poet.

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Chrissyray Weetra 22 January 2012

it was a great poem

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Anam Naz 21 January 2012

guuud job done by u man keep it up n keep writing on the trash ov this system

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Lama Abbas 20 January 2012

beautifully expressed...

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Yatin yadvansh 20 January 2012

written...... in a motion....gud

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Smack Thompson 19 January 2012

Dude seems like the system just needs bodies to keep runnin they dont care if they got the right people got no money you got no justice good poem man

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Unwritten Soul 19 January 2012

Such a wasteful energy they done, to blame and change to end random useful bulb/light without checking proper reason why the shine is not appear...should we blame on a bulb anytime it doesnt shine? what about the other bulb who really not working or is it switch or fuse broken? ...the wrong judgment never make room bright again as the pick wrong decision to fix problem....i am so sad and cry for this man for him deserves better living.....Oh justice come and heal the blame! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Aj Z 19 January 2012

nice work dude... :)

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