An Innocent Love Affair Comments

I wrote a letter on a pinkish paper, Showing two bleeding hearts stitched with an arrow, / Lovely poem about the teenage love affair which supposedly was cut short for want of communication- verbal or written. The episode involving Suraiya's movie makes an interesting reading. Thanks.

Sir, That was a wonderful poem. I loved it. I had believed that incidents of these kind occur only in my life. Now, understand that such affairs happen in everybody's life. And Suraiyya is one of my favourite actors of all time. And very lovable singer too. The immortal voice of hers! Thank you so much for rekindling the memories. A 10 for your lovely poem. Your Urdu poems are fantastic; I would take time read them once again. Thank you again.

Beautiful dear Suraiyawala! If Kelly's endorsement of your love poetry is any testimony, you are still a naughty Suraiyawala! Well done. Old memories are precious. They make our precious songs. (10)

An innocent poem..............................

'But the innocent boy inexperienced and feeble, His shyness internal! His fears external! Remained in the pocket, the lovely rhymes' Perfectly captured a universal experience. And brought back the memory of my time upon that rack... Exactly what a poem should do.... Thank you.

A beautiful poem, a picture of an innocent teen aged love....................10

Very sweet poem. Keep up

a sweet love story... nice... a common thing with teenagers.... : D i realky like this poem! !

Love of Suraiya and Devanand is very famous. May be there so many would be loving her. Now one more name is annexed on pen and paper. Similarly i was fan of Rekha.For few yrs i was sending beautiful card on her birth day. But she never replied/ After my marriege when i came with my wife, my niece commented Aunty is like Rekha. then after so manny commented. Either she is like or not but her temperament is alike. thatso she is named Hitler. but she is more caring n helpful to all. even at mid night she can accompany for her neighbour for hospital. but love is innocent in all ages. but i m fearless bcoz she has taken words from me not to allow any one. i hv to comply.

In my opinion, this was a such a cute poem mostly due to its ending, but what also catches my attention is your ability to capture, not the complexity, but simplicity of love, specifically teenage love. In some love stories or poems, they'd make the love more dramatic by adding a third wheel and such, which sometimes gets annoying especially to fangirls like me: P. Hence, I love how this love story was simple. There was no complete hindrance to this story. Let's hope the punishment doesn't become an annoying complete hindrance though. :)

You tell your story with great creativity. Truly an unspoilt and innocent love

It happens with all teenagers. Lovely Poem.

Nice poem as well as nice story. It has a soft essence that attracts me to read again.So I rated it 10. Ruma.

Ha ha ha ha Nice poem as well as nice story. I read it well. It has a soft essence that attracts me to read again. Ruma