An Inkling Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

An Inkling

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an inkling
between man and woman
an inkling
between woman and man....

between root and flower
flower and root
between sun and moon
moon and the sun

as to who
provides
and who
benefits

would kill this world in short

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 24 December 2009

I had an inkling of this nice inkling poem.

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Sandra Fowler 24 December 2009

Life is a puzzle and connections are a marvel. I accept this and stand amazed at what I am too finite to fully understand. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Nikunj Sharma 24 December 2009

YOU ARE A MASTER POET....THIS IS TOO GOOD, RELEVANT, AND STIMULATING TO THE CORE....WOW IS THE WORD

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 23 December 2009

A ticklish and eternal teaser.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 23 December 2009

A beautiful idea has been idolised through your poem sir.....I agree with this! :)

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Indira Renganathan 30 December 2009

May be ego and fear are the cause...but I agree with Sathya....nice thought...thank you

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 December 2009

Man and woman two sides of one Divine Arthanaareeshwaram

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Louis Rams 25 December 2009

neither one can live without the other. gr8888t write

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Raj Nandy 24 December 2009

'An inkling' is slight and imperfect knowledge of things! While the world of Nature may continue to exist, human beings cannot do so - with such shallowness and imperfections! Apart from learning to co-exist with the environment surrounding him, - humans have to learn to reconcile the soul within the the 'divine soul'; - or else he destoys himself both physically & spiritually! -Raj (I feel this should be the correct interpretation. I donot comment when I fail to appreciate /understand what the writer wants to convey! An inkling is not enough!)

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Patti Masterman 24 December 2009

This has a very deep and timeless feel to it.

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