Monday, August 31, 2020

An Indoor Game Comments

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As they grew up their relationship received a blow,
a sudden lightening divided the breast of vast sky.
The girl was from high caste, the boy was from low.
The prehistoric superstition would never die.
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee
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Kostas Lagos 01 September 2020

Well written Sankhajit!

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 01 September 2020

the caste anomaly is finely revisited with fresh clarity

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 August 2020

His girl forgot him forever, declared the protestant, 'A criminal'. The childhood love would come back never, it was an indoor game, nothing serious at all! ......it's pathetic feelings in love; love is love, actually love does not know what's religion, caste, hue of skin, rules of society, social status, age; love is love an indomitable feelings of inside between two opposite gender; beautiful poem penned

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Deluke Muwanigwa 31 August 2020

Beautiful poem. And to think this actually happens in the 21st century. Thats what i love about poetry " Speak truth to power till they go south" Great poem

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