An Indian Skill Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

An Indian Skill

Rating: 5.0


on the street
a small girl is walking on a rope
with a stick in her hand to balance
with a pot on her head which she has to balance
her mother or the lady with her...
plays the drummy music on a plate
her father or the caretaker manages the show
a catchy site for the children and foreigners too
a skill which encashes right on the street

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 March 2009

the narration is well crafted

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Simran Sanganeria 07 March 2009

nice poem that only an indian can write..........

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2009

This is a cheap street circus, which is better than begging in the street for a livelihood. A good theme exists in this poem.

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Dream Catcher 01 March 2009

seen this sight and wondered how they do it...this is truly an indian skill.Nice poem

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Ranjit Ravindran 18 October 2009

That's really a sad sight, , , , , , , I don't like circus tooo, just for the same reason, , , , I don't see skill there....i see the desperate struggle for survival paradoxically putting their life on the line. Hope their conditions improve...

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Sandra Martyres 14 March 2009

Yes indeed Samanyan..this is a disturbing but routine sight in India...kids working to feed the family. Nicely told

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Bob Blackwell 14 March 2009

A disturbing picture you have drawn of a needy family business. Perhaps I hope one day there will be no need. 10 Bob

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Sandra Fowler 14 March 2009

I agree with Chitra. A colorful picture. But what is the tragedy that produced it? It is disturbing.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Chitra - 09 March 2009

a sensitive theme...which disturbs the mind, well protrayed

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