Saturday, May 28, 2016

An Indian Monsoon (May/2016) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The earth is parched
with her thirsty tongue sticking out
but the wind of change
has summoned at the far horizons
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Rajesh Thankappan
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I am a rain-lover. Come out Rajesh-ji, let us celebrate and dance.

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Rajesh Thankappan 31 May 2016

Thank you Mihaela ma'am for your words of appreciation. The monsoon is around the corner and let us hope for a good monsoon this year. Thank you.

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 May 2016

Great imagery, the way you started your poem, and the last two lines: '' children floats paper boat in puddles let's hope they ferry away our cares. '' I hope will be a good monsoon in India this year.

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