Friday, May 1, 2009

An Incurable Illness Comments

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Sometimes as I dream of being with you
I assume that your sweet voice sings really
The beats in that voice intoxicate me
But when I realise all is an illusion
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 July 2009

Nice poem on one-sided bondage of love. Beautifully expressed feelings.

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a superb and marvelous write this is..outstanding piece!

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Okan Emanet 01 May 2009

such a fabulous poem... I really congratulate my dear student on that kind of successful attempt to write a poem. I wish her desire would last forever. This is really a fantastic poem. A new way to tell about love....

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