An Inch Comments

words as long as an inch can travel miles and touch someone's heart beyond the soil one steps on... beautiful gift you've made us... thanks

How far? Good write. Could use a bit of minimalism.

The moral must be 'a frustrating inch away from that which we desire may as well be a mile' and for those of us who often suffer from insomnia an inch away from sleep is deeply distressing. An inch away from love, seems like a knife etch for any afraid to take the final leap or afraid of saying or doing the wrong thing. Loved the deeply moving images of 'An Inch' too far to obtain.

Very nice poem. Well-deserved vote for 'Poem of the day! ''but the inch of stillness so brittle'...Awesome!

An inch away is a good imagination and poetry.

An inch away from being a real poem because of the lack of rhyme scheme. Nice ideas..nice stream of consciousness style. Good vocabulary. Needs a few more little bits of clarity within the inches of perplexity.

The little bit that is so significant!

Beautiful thoughts, well-penned!

Great poem! Well done to you!

An inch is very important. Verygood poem

Nicely written, calm, yet emphatic. I like alot. Well done.

I like this piece. It sounds so romantic. You have an imaginative and creative mind. Keep it up!

Emotions are what guide us through lifes journey... The ability to capture them for all eternity in the form of the written word is truly an art... Congratulations... I love your poem...

reminds me of a broken heart that longs for that lost love but is gripped with so much fear, they can only dream and wish. this is so heart felt. keep writting sweetheart. this is so full of passionate reasonace

the inch is symbolic! the sound of the poem is fascinating! i like it! good jod.

fascinating wonderful amazing i just love it lot of emotions; i love your ideas

Very fascinating. I love how you've captured the barest escape with the repeated reminder of a mere inch and inching away. Delightful. Intriguing as well....seemingly referring to forbidden pleasures. I enjoyed how you depicted it all so cleverly with just an 'inch'....Excellent!

I like this poem. Nicely written. Good choice of words.

Kind of glum for my taste

This poem is very good! I love the way you used simple words but brought out so much emotions through them... keep on writing you are very talented! ! !