Saturday, April 11, 2009

An Incessant Cry Comments

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A infant cries incessantly
and the warm blood flows beneath,
Kissing his soft palms
playing with its warm embrace
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Chandrashekar a posy poet
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a very well written piece..everything from the baby's point of view..told well..read my 'the happening'

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Indira Babbellapati 25 April 2009

how many lives must hv slipped into sleep...very well written poem!

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Sandhya S N 24 April 2009

really felt sad brilliant writing sandhya

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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009

Good write...picturesque presentation of the theme inside... 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 April 2009

Tired of weeping; surrenders to sleep And incidence always leaves scars deep.....................Poem reflects reality of our time.........Good Write.........

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Chandrashekar a posy poet

Chandrashekar a posy poet

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