Sunday, March 18, 2012

-an In The Moment Poem- Comments

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why do you torture me,
like you aint got no other place to be,
just messin with my mind,
giving me a hard time...
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Shelby Marie Peters
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Daniel Warner 18 March 2012

What I would say is don't succumb to pressure you feel is unnecessary to commit to.In other word look to things you enjoy doing to bide time to exclude those types of people from your life.If they bother you don't pay them any attention they don't deserve and make the best of what good traits you have(as in, writing this type of poetry I'm commenting on.I hope you do better in your predicament.-Daniel

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