Friday, July 6, 2018

An Impure Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Impure soul
contaminated with souls.
Self-within with selves
With selves not to be Self.
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Rohan Razi
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Hans Vr 07 July 2018

Very interesting poem. There are indeed so many secrets and mysteries surrounding our soul. I consider the soul the purest part of our being, but it tends to be so silent, when compared to the loudness of our ego (including our intellect and emotions) . I often wanted my soul to be louder, but then became aware that the way of our soul IS silence. Well written and thought provoking poem.

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Rohan Razi 09 July 2018

Many thanks Hans Vr for your comment. Soul embedded with many secrets and mysteries. Soul sometimes contaminated in which I described as Impure Soul. It need to be purified at any costs. As impure soul will bring unhappiness and miseries to life and we as the owner of the soul. We can communicate with our own soul when we are sad and happy. Why we sad and happy? These feelings are abstract and difficult to understand. But that IS our soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

When contaminated with negative desires and energy with bad thoughts and actions a soul is regarded as impure soul. Secrets of souls remain in truth. Original values should be up-lifted. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10

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Rohan Razi 06 July 2018

As it remains Secrets, only little by little we try do uncover those secrets. Humans are so unique. Many things about human that we need to uncover not on about physical that to many see it but souls as well. Until now it still remains mysteries. Thanks for rating this poem.

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