Saturday, March 11, 2023

An Impulsive Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

That moment when an idea for a poem springs to mind,
And everything else gets left behind.
Must get this down on paper!
Or i may surely forget it later!
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 March 2023

A magnificent poem with fantastic ending dear poetess.....loved it

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2023

Jayne, I can so totally relate to this poem! Sometimes, it's so frustrating that I just get up and write it down. The problem: up all night writing more poems. At least, you didn't forget this winner of a poem!

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 March 2023

Thank you everyone for your lovely kind comments : ) So appreciated x

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M. Asim Nehal 12 March 2023

A fertile poetic mind, I liked it.5*****

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 March 2023

A relatable dilemma is depicted in the lines of this splendid verse. The final two lines conclude the poem nicely.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 March 2023

Wondeful Jayne tfs

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Anjandev Roy 11 March 2023

Fantastic representation.....thanks for sharing......

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D.N. Rebb 11 March 2023

I think we all do that. Great poem.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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