Wednesday, August 27, 2008

An Improvised Note Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know the name,
or purpose,
of that voice climbing out of you,
with its claws digging into the rocky wall of your throat.
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Delilah Miller
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Koyel Mitra 07 September 2008

Lovely poem with beautiful imagery.Loved it! A 10+.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 September 2008

Cerulean secrets and crimson wishes for fame, ............... the secrets whern stashed in hide, . yet bloom by the fragrance of flower................oh what a wonderful and powerful imagery, wrought ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing

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Stewart Green 05 September 2008

Brilliant! I really enjoy your work.

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Delilah Miller

Delilah Miller

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