Tuesday, May 12, 2015

An Impossible Task Comments

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I could count the grains of sand on the shore,
Through a straw, I could drink the sea dry,
But never could I stop loving you,
If commanded, I could not comply
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

I see there are 4 poems of the same title on PH. AND, wow, each poet's first name begins with 'L'. ;)

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

But if he DID, he'd walk all day on COLD water, trying to not, on his feet, HUGE blisters raise! !

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

Who would dance on the sun! ? Who indeed? Perhaps B. Johnston, to feel the praise?

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

I can change a diaper, but not a bird's song. If I were told to do it, I'd simply answer: 'Why? '

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

My math ain't real good, my stomach's too small. To cease being your friend, I'll never ever try.

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

Hell's bells. Are you related to Jesus? ? ? [ I could walk on water to come to you, ] I doubt I could improve on this effort of yours; it's supreme. But I'll offer up somethin'. bri ;) : )

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

Hell's bells! Are

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

Hell

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Stephen Katona 15 May 2015

Dancing on the surface of the sun, counting grains of sand, drinking the sea dry through a straw...and so on. Such great imagination to show how powerful love can be. I really enjoyed this masterpiece.

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Jaishree Nair 12 May 2015

Deep love is divine that the rare enjoy. Thanks for sharing. You have presented the conundrum well

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 12 May 2015

strong feeling to show love! Is love worth? for you, enjoy yourself! ! !

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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