An Impossible Life Comments

'Death only bringing life, Life only bringing death, ' What a musical fife is this! Deep runs the themes but style of the poet floats on the waters. I ponder on those 2 lines as every other is same... I am intrigued by your thought process! Is the one who went to heaven abode leaving you so mourning is it your family member or a close friend? ***** Star is your poem!

Thanks, this one is a real eye-opener. Life bringing death, Death bringing life. Brilliant in its truth. Like all people I've also wondered what's this life for if one day you're there no more? Oh, to unfold the mystery...

The idea was nicely intense, this poem has wise touch...Keep it up crimson, this sound cool, bright and dark...yet it still crimson and it's good :) _Unwritten Soul

Really like this. Make the most of life because Before you know it its over. Good write.