Monday, July 6, 2009

An Immutable Act Comments

Rating: 4.9

Seven Suns and all that has come
since the day your spirit took flight.
yet it's only a candle's flicker in my eyes.
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Hunter Dasten
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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

a sad poem! ! ! Well-written! ! !

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Claude H Oliver Ii 29 January 2010

I'm going out on a limb in saying that this addresses the suicide of someone very close. Very touching.

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Frankie Stamey 28 January 2010

Wow! A very sad piece indeed! !

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Chloe Young 04 August 2009

pretty much brought tears to my eyes, amazing <3 10

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Sally Carter 09 July 2009

A powerful poem that brought a lump to my throat. The repeated question feels strong and real. Thank you.

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Ben Gieske 06 July 2009

This poem has a fresh feeling to it with a different approach. I like these particular lines: a tumbling wheel of questions over and over I am the same in all my asking. I am here standing tall atop these twenty four hundred days.

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