An Immutable Act Comments

a sad poem! ! ! Well-written! ! !

I'm going out on a limb in saying that this addresses the suicide of someone very close. Very touching.

Wow! A very sad piece indeed! !

pretty much brought tears to my eyes, amazing <3 10

A powerful poem that brought a lump to my throat. The repeated question feels strong and real. Thank you.

This poem has a fresh feeling to it with a different approach. I like these particular lines: a tumbling wheel of questions over and over I am the same in all my asking. I am here standing tall atop these twenty four hundred days.