An Immortal Life Comments
Bind yourself with honesty
Adorn your voice with truth,
Wash your hearts off brutality
And present yourself with hospitability and soothe.
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beautiful lines as well as writing skill and with best finish
A wonderful spiritual poem, nicely penned................................
Very nicely and aptly presented. Yes, the secrets of meaningful life are virtuous deeds and inquisitive zests. Best suggestion for the beginners. I think you are not a student but a teacher. Many thanks my dear Naima, may God bless you and your family........10
Thanks a lot, Mr.Mahakul! I am glad that you liked my poem and that you had made me proud by comparing me with a teacher. ThankYou sir for reading it.I would keep writing and I demand you to please keep voting them.
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No treasure is so precious as descipline, No habbit is better than keeping oneself clean, No mind would be sharp without good listening skill And quiteness would make you all firm, determined and still. your great and fine philosophy of life is clearly described here..... love this poem. thankyou dear poetess. tony