An Imaginay Ideal Poem by Akhtar Jawad

An Imaginay Ideal

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Carrying someone in thoughts brings a sleep
That is so much peaceful and deep
It may be my frustration
But I live in imagination
And one that doesn't exist I keep.

Thursday, August 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thanks to Valsa George for inspiration.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 22 August 2018

Ideals do not exist still they exist in our thoughts and drems.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 August 2017

Imagination is behind a lot of good work. If it weren't for imagination, we wouldnt be flying in airplanes. A thoughtful piece.

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Valsa George 10 August 2017

Ha Ha.....! If it is like a sleeping pill, have it and sleep sound! As far as you keep it a secret In the inmost shrine of your heart It is a pleasure But can cause you pressure Thinking it might hit you like a bullet!

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 August 2017

According to Hali, most of the poets are in love with an imaginary ideal. Thank you very much for exposing the fundamental fault in poets.

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