An Imagination Comments

''Often says to me, He Don’t become like me Because You can’t turn back from the track on which I’m'' innovative tricks to write poetry on two counts....lovely keep going..i love it...10

A beautiful poem, winners neva quit n quitters neva win. I likd d spirituality n moon line both, for im a fan of both. Take care. Pls read my latest poem on mr.bean.

Superb poem..words sounds like as if they are speaking. 10/10 for this beautiful imagination: -)

We all are learners and we all have flaws...pls do not mention any such thing because what you have written here is much strong and passionate...many phrases and lines are just so delicate...very good farah...and strong too! ! !

A voice a silent voice with the sound that can be felt perceived desired and i think must be fulfilled

Very fine imaginary, quite interesting to read.

Good imagination, the last few lines were my favourite as they were simple, eloquent and playfully romantic.

nice imagination! so deep.....so touchy.

Dear Farah, never be over-conscious of literary weaknesses in your poem. we always improve with time. Poetry is an expression basically of 'self' so whatever you feel should come out.

Don't ever be in any kind of doubt that you are able to carry your reader with you. You are able to let the reader feel what you feel. A nice beginning and very touching end. You have your own style. If poetry is the name of rules and regulation then even Shakespeare was not a poet. If it is written for people by people then......... you are wonderful.

very passionate and deep write

great imagination your words so alive and i really love your way to express it wonderful work

A really good imaginary with painted natures on people mind here, it let people have the words and create their own images by these clues...it nice work, just a bridge of illusion, that is what imagination can do :) _Soul

a great imagination Farah. to love and be loved so nce

not bad Farah ji... mistakes and errors are natural with most of the ESL practitioners so don't worry about it....poem is great, thoughts are indeed very touching and shows how brilliantly have been treated, if feelings get personal than masterpiece emerge, a dejected mood has been seen on this love canvass, as one of our fellow poet says that poetry is a channel of transportation and you did it well.... we can feel.

overflow of warm emotions I liked the lines very much -To love and being love would revamp our desolate charms.