Saturday, March 10, 2012

An Image Of Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I knew you were coming,
Since I saw you first in my dream...
With God's given power for natural cloning,
You became my life's stream...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

this is a great tribute to your beautiful darling daughter. She is so lovely, and you are a lucky dad. charming write

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Ency Bearis 25 March 2012

Such a lovely tribute to your daughter, the way as a father need to be with such love, great write my friend. A 10*****

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Lenore Lee 15 March 2012

This is a completely beautiful poem, you're daughter is lucky to have a dad like you; except, shouldn't the last line be 'my blood runs through your veins'? Other then that this is as lovely as always.

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Neela Nath Das 12 March 2012

Nice poem. The flow of the poem is beautiful.

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Yamini Khanna 10 March 2012

Beautifully put together!

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Annabel Cruz 10 March 2012

Nothing conveys our love and emotions clearer than when we write about our children....those closest to us, our clones as you so very aptly put it. Lovely Romeo!

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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