An Illusion Comments

I love illusions..they are far more true and real than reality.: -)

So very nicely put, Thankyou for sharing

Nothing last forever, the tension has to go. Things must die to be reborne. Good writing! !

Very visual... Sexy and lucid on the mind

Hi Caroline, A very interesting twist. Exqusitely written. Provocatively poignant.

A nicely crafted piece. You have a fine feel for poetry - and that's something that can't be learned. You're born with it. Looking forward to reading more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥